You see,
the problem is the solution is:
it’s broken, adhesion
in pieces: willing togetherness,
dull shards bright futures
of expectancy, of a full life,
lost euphoria, that awakening
fragments of intimacy. engagement
Thrown many times in a single glance,
dropped so often, caught in closeness
it no longer has a chiming bell
a pulse. a passionate throb.
It so depends on how you look at line or range.
dwk
beautiful write.. its very powerful.. 🙂
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thankyou abichica I thought you had vanished.
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I love your poetry and I love that you are risking so much by throwing yourself out there!! I am impressed!!!
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Great, original juxtaposition.
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I don’t think they line up like you would like but they have an undulating rhythm that somehow adds to it. Yes, there are a few things WordPress hasn’t concerned itself with.
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