crashing

Posted: July 11, 2008 in Poems

 

all you want to be to me
is a jerking, shaking, shattering illusion
in a death plane
with unknown corners and ledges
and starts and stops and hazardous drops.
Why do you love me so epilepsy?
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  1. » dave says:

    No I did not refer to "Line" on some one else\’s Live space, just left my comment on his blog about his experience and its simililarity to mine of FaceBook
     

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  2. Line says:

    Did you refer you refer to me on barewolf pages.. because i didnt understand.
     
     
    well i have a brain tumor and epilepsy, so now know that…..
     
    Love and bless
    Line

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  3. jenagoth says:

    hi i think you cope better than i would  but i do understand it i would be so scared  keep well xxjen

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  4. penny says:

    What a wonderful way with words you have, especially about such a painful suject.  Pen.

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  5. Sheena says:

    ah ….to be so loved….with a passion that won\’t let go… ..!!!hope you\’re recovering from your hazardous drop….love to you………………..xx.

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  6. Sherry says:

    Oh Dave, I\’m so sorry you have epilepsy. Sending prayers to you!!!
    Hugs
    Sherry

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  7. jenagoth says:

    im so sorry you hurt yourself it must be an awful condition for you that you have to live with i get panicky when i go dizzy so you must find it such a pain having seizures i know a few people who are like you and its amazing how you cope take care and i hope your injury is less painful now  best wishes jen xx

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